Once we has shown our 2nd cut of our music video, we received a 2nd sheet from the teacher with feedback of how we did and what we could do to improve
Here is the feedback:
- Stabilizing the first bed shot, removing the jerk on the zooming out phase.
- Walking down the stair scene - re shoot scene getting in three different shots including close ups of the framed pictures.
- Include lip syncing or show someone playing the guitar. We came up with the idea if a busker playing the guitar in the street, but without any strings on his instrument.
- The freeze frame of the character being run over could replace the looking through the window scene, working well with the sound of the car crash.
- Instead of using the car crash incident from the television show Skins, we could film our own and have it being played on the television.
- We found a potential of applying the heartbeat monitor lines onto the blank piece of paper, making the scene more interesting and weird.
- Shorten screaming, chiaroscuro scenes as they lose their effect as we've played them too long.
- Needing to change the car park setting as it means there are people around, getting the total opposite effect and meaning we are going for.
- Add a scene of the driver getting out of the car earlier in the production, building a story for the viewer.
- Applying a red sky effect to the walking across the Mead's scene. The red sky will darken as he gets closer to the building, walking towards death or danger?
- Remove the laying on the ground scene inside the house from the rewind sequence as it doesn't relate to the story what so ever.
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