Production - Final version feedback

This was the final version of our production. We showed it to the teacher for what is probably the last time and again we were given feedback on what she thought of it. Here is what she said:

Holding shot steady; "Basic"

Opening zoom.

• Closing zoom.

Framing a shot; "Basic"

• Pictures on stairway not clear enough.
• Turn monitor shot to over the shoulder.

Appropriate material; "Proficient"

• Good choice of unsettling images.

Selecting mise en scene; "Basic"

• Black paper better for heart monitor shot.
• Make pictures on landing look genuine.

Editing for meaning; "Basic"

• Inter-cutting after the crash.

Varied shot transitions, caption and other FX; "Proficient"

• Time echo.
• Aeroplane effect.
• Colour saturation.

Use of sound with images/ editing; "Basic & Proficient"

• Make more of the beep in the corridor or change it to screeching car.
• Sound effects - crash, monitor bleep.